Saturday the rains have endlessly poured

In the metro, for six days it has stormed.

Neither the silver moon nor the yellow sun

Knows when it could bring back fun.

In dirty waters submerged are cars-

New and old submarines less the radars.

Gone are the riches of those superstars.


About RaineFairy

Just another girl who writes crappy doodles and sloppy scribbles.

29 responses to “SUBMERGED

  1. Very timely, my shoes are wet. Nice rhymes, and some nice pentameters. Cheers!

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  2. Good grief that’s an awful lot of rain!

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  3. Oh dear, I hope you and your family are fine 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Hello Fairy one.

    A real good piece! I like this, “New and old submarines less the radars”.

    You are doing very good pieces period and within the genre they become even better with more meaning.

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  5. Hey Lovely Fairy! Careful now, just stay safe and warm.

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  6. fictionalkevin

    This made me giggle.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Yup, and it still keeps on raining… Aaargh!


  8. ..not a good situation to be in


  9. wow, that is a serious rain. be safe

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